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Oct 9th, 2008 at 1:31am
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i have a burst of sunlight in my life, rose petal lips, skin the shade of rich ivory, wavy soft hair the shade of wheat the rays have illuminated.....and eyes that are cornflower blue!!! she is all that i am, and everyday that im with her , all my senses are awakened, her beauty is deep from within, and her eyes speak the words, that she cannot......she is a miracle, a gift....but she hides, desperately trying not to be noticed, her anxiety darting back and forth in the expressions cast upon her face....she is unsure, she wonders if it is safe, to make her delicate voice heard, but slowly.....she has begun to blossom, her confidence growing.....pride in her success, peaking thru her smiles!!!  i stand by and carefully watch, trying not to push to hard, trying to just catch small glimpses of her steady progress into interactions, i look up everyday....and say a thank you, for this chance to just be part of such a journey.....to be shown what love really is, i humbly, have been given a chance to hold a beam of sunlight, just for a moment.....it shines, and sparkles, but it doesnt belong to me.....i have just been given the chance to hold it, for this short time....until it shoots across the sky, and bursts into a display of lights!!!  my M has taught me the meaning of dreams..........
  
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Reply #1 - Oct 9th, 2008 at 2:32am
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Nik---

Lovely, and joyous!
What a wonderful expression of the emotions and thoughts of a mom and her daughter.

  
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Nikki, my friend.  I'm so glad you have joined us here, so others can enjoy your story telling.
Kiss
  

you were born to be a rainstorm
to be chaotic ,and to be bold ,
to show there's beauty in your heart
and you cannot be controlled
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Nik---

Lovely, and joyous!
What a wonderful expression of the emotions and thoughts of a mom and her daughter.




thank you so much......
  
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Reply #4 - Oct 9th, 2008 at 12:02pm
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HarleyWoman wrote on Oct 9th, 2008 at 3:30am:
Nikki, my friend.  I'm so glad you have joined us here, so others can enjoy your story telling.
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thank you for inviting me......i just write whats in my heart, i love my babies!!!  Smiley
  
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nikadee wrote on Oct 9th, 2008 at 12:02pm:
thank you for inviting me......i just write whats in my heart, i love my babies!!!  Smiley



I know, and they are lucky to have you. Others here will learn what a caring person you are....Those babies would be lost, if that they hadn't got you. Smiley
  

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Boy, it's a good thing someone said something about this being about your daughter.  I thought it was the beginning of a group novel and I was going to add to it.  Now I'm glad I didn't.  What a pity, Adonis Type and Batman would have had a ball.

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Nox wrote on Oct 9th, 2008 at 3:40pm:
Boy, it's a good thing someone said something about this being about your daughter.  I thought it was the beginning of a group novel and I was going to add to it.  Now I'm glad I didn't.  What a pity, Adonis Type and Batman would have had a ball.

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HarleyWoman wrote on Oct 9th, 2008 at 3:43pm:
You better behave!!


I'm trying ... the Devil made me do it.

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Reply #9 - Oct 9th, 2008 at 4:52pm
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Nox wrote on Oct 9th, 2008 at 3:40pm:
Boy, it's a good thing someone said something about this being about your daughter.  I thought it was the beginning of a group novel and I was going to add to it.  Now I'm glad I didn't.  What a pity, Adonis Type and Batman would have had a ball.

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well go ahead add to it.....as a matter of fact i dare ya!!! lolololololol Grin
  
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