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Whiner the Snowflake Goes to Washington - a creative work in progress
Feb 15th, 2018 at 11:37am
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- a Buddy the Elf type adventure, say Slutty the Snowflake Goes to Washington. I'll give it some thought. Slutty is a bit harsh - Meltie, or Whiner the Snowflake could work.

Like I always say, the title comes first.

Another edit

Then the characters - to hell with that story line and morality crap as a starting point - pick a few good characters and let the story rouler.

Happy Fats (being fat Tuesday and all)
Jogga the Dunlop
The Usurped King
The King Usuper
The Boisterous Silent People
and possibly Michael Bachman for giggles

and yet another edit

The citizens stood as one, loudly proclaiming, "you sir are usurped,
and he was,
the people celebrated in every home and tavern with almost constant cheering for Mr. Melty, the true king, who now ruled justly over all the land
little did they know that in the dead of night Frank Cracker had scooped up Whiner the Snowflake along with the Boisterous Silent People and stuffed them all in a giant Yeti marked Top Secret destination Siberian cold storage.
  

the wis-dum of acrhie
"I am sure Trump is like me."
"There is no capitalism under Obama’s rule. He is a fu8&^ communist."
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Re: Whiner the Snowflake Goes to Washington - a creative work in progress
Reply #1 - Mar 1st, 2018 at 1:40am
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Mr. Melty finally arrived at his destination after many days of painful travel by Yeti. The scenery wasn't the most pleasant to the eye, but it did have uniformity going for it. To some, uniformity is perfection, and no deviation should be tolerated.

Mr. Melty, knowing his mission, immediately sprang into action with his forked divining stick and divined the situation. It was worse than he thought! The diving stick led Mr. Melty in circles. This undoubtedly proved that a large pocket of methane lay just below the surface.

The explosion such a large pocket of deadly methane could release if the ice parted and the earth farted was clearly apparent. There was no time to waste!

Mr. Melty immediately, again, sprang into action by notifying all who mattered of the calamity to come. Every nation's climate division received the important, lifesaving info. Al Gore himself acknowledged the danger and immediately asked for donations to fund his next masterpiece.

Governments around the world we had left informed the reluctant United States of America of the disaster to come, and informed that country of its responsibility to spend all of its treasure and the treasure of its populace to avert the certain extinction of humankind.

Trump jumped into action, informing the house and senate of the impending loss of income for the mega-giant industrialist capitalist dogs already repressing populations of peaceful people everywhere who only wanted a minimum guaranteed income.

Those who repress us, the giant industrial complex that no longer exists in the United States saw their doom if their human slaves came to an untimely end, and contributed.

The earth was saved.

The pucker resulted in a burp instead of a massive fart.

Billions of dollars spent no doubt averted the apocalypse.

The evil corporations still exist.

Keep the faith, my brothers!

  

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Re: Whiner the Snowflake Goes to Washington - a creative work in progress
Reply #2 - Mar 4th, 2018 at 1:26pm
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No, no, no, no, no

You gotta stick with the characters.

You left out Michelle and trump is Jogga the Dunlop


Otherwise, good job
  

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Re: Whiner the Snowflake Goes to Washington - a creative work in progress
Reply #3 - Mar 4th, 2018 at 11:09pm
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billy.pilgrim wrote on Mar 4th, 2018 at 1:26pm:
No, no, no, no, no

You gotta stick with the characters.

You left out Michelle and trump is Jogga the Dunlop


Otherwise, good job


Characters reoccur. They don't need to occupy every scene.
  

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Reply #4 - Mar 5th, 2018 at 10:48am
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Harrys Sockpuppet4335 wrote on Mar 4th, 2018 at 11:09pm:
Characters reoccur. They don't need to occupy every scene.


agreed, but you can't go about just randomly changing their names. There is no excuse for changing Changing Jogga the Dunlop to Donald trump. It just doesn’t make any sense. Next you’ll be morphing The Usurped King into Ronald Reagan.

I do realize that I didn’t fully describe  Michelle’s position as queen of the Boisterous Silent People in the list of characters but since that posting her character has grown to be one of the big supporting leads.


now pay attention
  

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Reply #5 - Mar 20th, 2018 at 6:33pm
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What? No more masterpieces!
  

Queshank wrote on Oct 25th, 2018 at 9:13am:
FC,

I've been thinking about how I can respond conversationally without coming across as a total dick.

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Re: Whiner the Snowflake Goes to Washington - a creative work in progress
Reply #6 - Mar 21st, 2018 at 10:27am
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BowHunter wrote on Mar 20th, 2018 at 6:33pm:
What? No more masterpieces!


Waiting for divine inspiration. Feel free to join in.
  

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